Copywriting Clinic - Car Dealership TV Commercial
Tuesday March 4, 2008
A 30-second commercial for a car dealership rolls in for a tune-up.
Quick Look:
The ad does a good job of identifying the target audience. It definitely needs a major revamp on the visuals and portions of the copy need to be rewritten. Find out what can be fixed and what needs to be eliminated to get this ad back on the road in this Copywriting Clinic.
Your Turn to Help: Share Your Own Kudos, Comments and Suggestions on the Ad
Quick Look:
The ad does a good job of identifying the target audience. It definitely needs a major revamp on the visuals and portions of the copy need to be rewritten. Find out what can be fixed and what needs to be eliminated to get this ad back on the road in this Copywriting Clinic.
Your Turn to Help: Share Your Own Kudos, Comments and Suggestions on the Ad
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