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From Apryl Duncan, for About.com

Copywriting Clinic - Car Dealership TV Commercial

Tuesday March 4, 2008
A 30-second commercial for a car dealership rolls in for a tune-up.

Quick Look:
The ad does a good job of identifying the target audience. It definitely needs a major revamp on the visuals and portions of the copy need to be rewritten. Find out what can be fixed and what needs to be eliminated to get this ad back on the road in this Copywriting Clinic.

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