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From Bill Stoller, for About.com

Here are a few more Email do's and don'ts.

Do:

  • Make the information you place in the subject line short and to the point. Often, a reporter's Email software cuts off the subject at only a few words.

  • Don't get cute or be too vague in your subject line. For example "Here's a Great Story!" is vague and sounds like spam; "This Will Win You A Pulitzer!" will make you look silly (unless you're delivering the scoop of the century, of course!).

  • Try to make your most newsworthy points at the top of your Email message - don't expect a reporter to scroll down to find the news.

  • Include your contact information, including cell phone, Email address, regular address, fax number & Web site URL at the beginning and end of the Email.

  • Include a link to your Web site if you have additional information such as photos, press releases, bios, surveys, etc.

    Don't:

  • Include more than a short pitch letter or press release in the body of your Email.

  • Allow typos or grammatical errors.

  • Include an attachment with your Email. In this day and age of sinister viruses, reporters automatically delete Email with attachments.

  • Place the following words (by themselves) in the subject line: "Hi", "Hello" - the media's spam filters will pounce and destroy.

  • Send an Email with a blank subject line.

    A cool tip: Use Google News to search for recent stories that have appeared relating to your industry or field of interest. Then, Email the reporter directly (use a subject line such as Re: Your July 5th piece on electric cars).

    Give positive feedback on the story and let him know that, next time he's working an electric car story, he should get in touch, as you're an expert with provocative things to say. Give a couple of supporting facts to back up the assertion, include your phone number and web link, and ask if he'd like to see a full press kit. This technique really works!

    Bill Stoller, the "Publicity Insider," has spent two decades as one of America's top publicists. Now, through his website, eZine and subscription newsletter, Free Publicity: The Newsletter for PR-Hungry Businesses, he's sharing -- for the very first time -- his secrets of scoring big publicity. For free articles, publicity tips and much more, visit Bill's exclusive new site: Publicity Insider

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